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Isaya by VonDiezyl Isaya by VonDiezyl
"Sometimes you see right through me,
Like I am made of glass,
You see my rusted soul,
And my heart made of brass.

Can you see the wires,
Underneath my skin?
And can you see the nuts and bolts,
That holds everything in?

I'm slowly falling apart,
And there's nothing you can do,
I'm not a toy that can be mended,
With needles, thread or glue.

Don't try and fix me,
This is how it's always been,
You my boy are human,
And I am a machine."

Written by Liezyl Steyn (me)

This is Isaya, she's a new OC I've created.

I don't really know how I came up with her design...it just kind of happened lol.

Isaya is the product of an experiment. She was originally a complete robot, metal from head to toe. Over time she began to rust, and slowly fall apart. One day a boy found her, and promised to look after her and fix her. They fell in love with each other, but Isaya kept falling apart, bolt by bolt. The boy was grief stricken, and couldn't live without her, so he experimented on her and gave her some human organs to help her live, and love him even more in return.

But the boy didn't realize that by giving her a human heart, he was also giving her real feelings, and although she loved him very much, all she felt was pain. She was still falling apart, and there was nothing he could do to fix her.

Her chest is made of glass, allowing all to see her heart and spinal cord. She doesn't have any other organs, as she doesn't need them. Her heart is so large, because the boy wanted her to love him more than anyone else could, and it's what keeps her functioning. Her left knee is also made of glass, where a human knee bone is visible.

Song: To Be Torn by Kyla La Grange (Atatika Remix) [link]


Soooo yeah, lemme know what you guys think!! :) I REALLY appreciate feedback :heart:

Isaya created by :iconvondiezyl:
Art by :iconvondiezyl:
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Positives:
This picture is really creative and wonderful. I love the pose and details in this such as the hair, face and chest part. Haven't seen something like this for a long time :>

Negatives:
her hands and feet should be bigger, the hands should almost be able to cover the whole face and feet should be as big as the space between the shoulder and elbow. Her boobs could be shaded more so they look more 3D. Finally her neck should be shorter.

Hope this helped and I just want to say again that I really like this picture and character :heart:
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IcreateDGFs Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I am just wondering why in the hell havnt I seen this before. This is amazing, all the little details come together and make something wonderful, as always =)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow thank you! I'll have to redraw her this year :)
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Intriguing!
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!:)
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work!
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks :D
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!:)
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dragonbarnesz Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome OC and love the back story :D very impressive :D
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! It's the first back story I've ever written for an OC of mine, so I'm glad that you like it ^-^
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dragonbarnesz Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah i thought it wer really awesome and even more so knowing its ur first haha :D well done :D
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe naww thank you so much :la:
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dragonbarnesz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D welcomes :D
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RogueAngelDemon Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Wowsers!! That piece of writing is captivating also, completely draws you in and makes you want to read the whole story! Brilliant, I love it! :)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww thank you :D Maybe I should make it a real story :D
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RogueAngelDemon Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
I'll read it if you do! :)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much ;_;
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liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
The anatomy is really unique, I'm not even sure the right word for it.
I really like the design of the character too and her story sounds cool.
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like my character, and I'm really happy that you like the back story, because it's the first story I've ever written for an OC :D
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liyaperfidious Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
You're welcome.
I could never come up with stories ever XD
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha aww I'm sure you could O3O
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BillJersey Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student General Artist
I really dig the character design, but what really caught my attention is that amazing back story. Its a strange kind of happy while tragic at the same time.
Very creative. Would make for a pretty cool story.
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow thank you :heart: I'm a bi surprised that you like the story, mostly becaues I just came up with it on the spot and didn't give it too much thought XD When I read it again, I realized there are things I could still add.

It makes me really happy to know that you like the story, because it's the first real back story I've ever given an OC o.o

Thank you for your support my friend :iconplzhug:
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BillJersey Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Well, thats the cool thing about characters. There's always room for more stories.

You just keep that imagination running wild. :)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha yeah that's so true :D
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wickedhousephantasm Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
u see it's just what i told u before u really love to draw sxxxy big hip's & u luv to make yr women look very sexy just like i do. & yes i love to draw big sexy hip's & real big sexy boob's so i believe u just have yr way of drawing yr style .
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha yeah it's true, I like drawing my girls with hips and curvy figures because to me, that's what makes a woman different to a man in appearance. I can't draw men AT ALL! lol
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Intriguing!
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you think so ;)
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Mayeaux Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, indeed!:)
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xSilverflowerx Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
This is really cool girly amg ;A; The detail and uniqueness brings -- what's the word -- joy to my eyes? Lol I don't know if that made any sense haha~ But when I saw this, I felt like my eyes popped out of my skull lol :>>> It's fresh, new different, and I LOVES IT OuO!! Good job :la:
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OuO LDIFHGFDN I saw this comment and it made me sooo happy!! :la:

Hehe yes it totally makes sense O3O and thank you so much! I was a bit worried that it was too "different" and didn't really come out that well, but seeing that you really like it has gotten rid of all my worries :D Thank you girly ^-^

YAYS I LOVESH YOU MEI-MEI :heart:
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xSilverflowerx Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Uubuu I happy it made you happy ;A;:heart:
It's my pleasure! :D Pfft who cares what others think! Uniqueness is what makes each person special! This should always apply to art too c: You know when Picasso drew the ugly pictures he did, people thought he was crazy and wanted him to draw his charming and peaceful realism pics again but he didn't care ^^ Just draw what you like and what you want to Liezyl-girly :la:
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yuh I will ^-^ Nawww thank you for such inspiring words OuO You're amazing, you know that? XD
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xSilverflowerx Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
You're most welcome! Aww thank you so much ; 7 ; :iconrubcheeksplz:
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RubyPheonix Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great design and story :clap:
She's awesome!
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay thank you OuO I've never written an OC story before, so I'm really glad that you like it!! :la:
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RubyPheonix Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought it was an interesting story. Usually I'd hear it the other way around, people becoming robots to live forever not robots becoming human to live. And the relationship with the boy makes it even more detailed and interesting :)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe thank you :D I'm so glad that you like it!! :heart: I didn't really know where it would go when I first thought up the idea of her - it was only when I finished the drawing that I knew what her story should be :D
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RubyPheonix Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well it turned out to be a great story and poem :D
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nawww thanks you! :hug:
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RubyPheonix Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome :hug:
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Kikomazumi Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SHE LOOKS AMAZINGNESS
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AWWWWSH THANKS YOU GIRLY O3O I'm so glad that you like her!
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Kikomazumi Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np ^-^
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Branded-Rose Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love her hair! :D And that poem is just epic. :)
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VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! :D I wanted to go for something I hadn't done before XD
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Branded-Rose Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome. :D
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