"Sometimes you see right through me,
Like I am made of glass,
You see my rusted soul,
And my heart made of brass.
Can you see the wires,
Underneath my skin?
And can you see the nuts and bolts,
That holds everything in?
I'm slowly falling apart,
And there's nothing you can do,
I'm not a toy that can be mended,
With needles, thread or glue.
Don't try and fix me,
This is how it's always been,
You my boy are human,
And I am a machine."
Written by Liezyl Steyn (me)
This is Isaya, she's a new OC I've created.
I don't really know how I came up with her design...it just kind of happened lol.
Isaya is the product of an experiment. She was originally a complete robot, metal from head to toe. Over time she began to rust, and slowly fall apart. One day a boy found her, and promised to look after her and fix her. They fell in love with each other, but Isaya kept falling apart, bolt by bolt. The boy was grief stricken, and couldn't live without her, so he experimented on her and gave her some human organs to help her live, and love him even more in return.
But the boy didn't realize that by giving her a human heart, he was also giving her real feelings, and although she loved him very much, all she felt was pain. She was still falling apart, and there was nothing he could do to fix her.
Her chest is made of glass, allowing all to see her heart and spinal cord. She doesn't have any other organs, as she doesn't need them. Her heart is so large, because the boy wanted her to love him more than anyone else could, and it's what keeps her functioning. Her left knee is also made of glass, where a human knee bone is visible.
Song: To Be Torn by Kyla La Grange (Atatika Remix)
[link]Soooo yeah, lemme know what you guys think!!
I REALLY appreciate feedback
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Sta.sh
This picture is really creative and wonderful. I love the pose and details in this such as the hair, face and chest part. Haven't seen something like this for a long time :>
Negatives:
her hands and feet should be bigger, the hands should almost be able to cover the whole face and feet should be as big as the space between the shoulder and elbow. Her boobs could be shaded more so they look more 3D. Finally her neck should be shorter.
Hope this helped and I just want to say again that I really like this picture and character
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